Essay 23: Salary

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people choose their jobs BASED ON THE SIZE OF THE SALARY OFFERED . Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important.

On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary IN ORDER FOR PEOPLE TO MEET THEIR BASIC NEEDS . For example, we all need money to PAY FOR HOUSING, FOOD, BILLS, HEALTH CARE, AND EDUCATION. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that ALLOWSTHEM TO COVER THESE NEEDS and HAVE A REASONABLE QUALITY OF LIFE . If people chose their jobs BASED ON ENJOYMENT OR OTHER NON­FINANCIAL FACTORS , they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing A CAREER PATH  that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and RAISE A FAMILY.

Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, CAN MAKE A HUGE DIFFERENCE TO WORKERS’ LEVELS OF HAPPINESS AND GENERAL QUALITY OF LIFE. Secondly, many people’s feelings of job satisfaction COME FROM THEIR PROFESSIONAL ACHIEVEMENTS, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and CONTRIBUTE SOMETHING POSITIVE TO SOCIETY.

In conclusion, while salaries certainly AFFECT PEOPLE’S CHOICE OF PROFESSION , I do not believe that MONEY OUTWEIGHS ALL OTHER MOTIVATORS .

Những cụm từ cần lưu ý:

BASED ON THE SIZE OF THE SALARY OFFERED: dựa trên mức lương được trả.

IN ORDER FOR PEOPLE TO MEET THEIR BASIC NEEDS: để mọi người đáp ứng những nhu cầu cơ bản của họ.

PAY FOR HOUSING, FOOD, BILLS, HEALTH CARE, AND EDUCATION: trả tiền thuê nhà, thực phẩm, hóa đơn, dịch vụ chăm sóc sức khỏe và giáo dục.

ALLOWSTHEM TO COVER THESE NEEDS: cho phép họ trang trải những nhu càu đó.

HAVE A REASONABLE QUALITY OF LIFE: có một chất lượng sống hợp lý

BASED ON ENJOYMENT OR OTHER NON­FINANCIAL FACTORS: dựa trên sở thích hoặc các yếu tố khác không liên quan đến vấn đề tài chính.

A CAREER PATH: con đường sự nghiệp.

RAISE A FAMILY: nuôi sống gia đình.

CAN MAKE A HUGE DIFFERENCE TO WORKERS’ LEVELS OF HAPPINESS AND GENERAL QUALITY OF LIFE : có thể tạo ra sự khác biệt rất lớn đối với mức độ hạnh phúc và chất lượng cuộc sống nói chung của người lao động.

COME FROM THEIR PROFESSIONAL ACHIEVEMENTS : đến từ những thành tựu đạt được trong công việc.

CONTRIBUTE SOMETHING POSITIVE TO SOCIETY: đóng góp một điều gì đó tích cực cho xã hội.

AFFECT PEOPLE’S CHOICE OF PROFESSION: ảnh hưởng sự lựa chọn của mọi người về nghề nghiệp.

MONEY OUTWEIGHS ALL OTHER MOTIVATORS: tiền bạc quan trọng hơn những động lực khác.